J.M. Williams

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Going AWOL


I just wanted to let everyone know that I will be AWOL for a little bit. I am attending a legal symposium for the military–so I guess it’s the opposite of AWOL. But regardless, I am away from my computer.

Moreover, when I return in a week or so I will need to get hard to work on the next episode of Call of the Guardian and other projects that I have let slide recently. I am just starting episode four of that series, and our group has decided we need at least five episodes complete apiece before we even think about going live. I also need to finalize The Adventures of Iric for Kindle publication before December. The blog, and social media, have been a bit of a distraction lately, so I will be setting them aside for a while until I get caught back up.

So don’t take my silence to be anything ominous. It’s just a temporary shift of priorities.


Update on David K.


About a week ago I posted links to some of my favorite blogs. One of those was for blogger-mate David K. He has since moved operations to a new website, one that looks quite nice, in my opinion.

He still writes short fiction and poetry, and articles on writing. His new website can be found HERE.

A Few of My Favorite Blogs


I have not been keeping up with this blog as well as I should have. Sometime in the past couple neglected months, I passed two hundred followers. Knowing that I am not the most active blogger (understatement of the year), that seems like a decent achievement.

In the process of building this site, I’ve also discovered many other interesting blogs by follow fiction authors. So, I thought I’d take a moment to share some of them. Of course, it would not be possible to mention all of the awesome bloggers I currently follow in a single post. This is a just a tiny selection.

Fiction Blogs

Anyone who has followed my page for a while–and has seen the comments section–should know I have something going with writer David K. He was one of the first people I connected with when I started out on WordPress, and he has encouraged me constantly through my writing struggle. On his website, he posts great short fiction, writing tips–basically the same sort of thing I post about. Birds of a feather, I guess…

Another author and blogger I have always enjoyed is Shawn Cowling. I started writing seriously less than a year ago, after a years-long Terry Pratchett binge. So obviously, Pratchett’s humorous slant infected my sensibilities. I still find myself trying to write humor or satire into my work, though I can never be sure if it works. That’s the trouble with humor, everyone’s funny bone is different. All I can say is that Shawn Cowling makes me laugh. I think he does humor better than me.

Blogs on Writing

A lot of the blogs I follow discuss the writing craft and business. There are far too many to mention here. If you want to discover them the same way I did, use the tag “on writing” in the WordPress reader. There is one page I’d like to mention, though.

It should be obvious that I am big on fantasy. So I appreciate bloggers who discuss the mechanics of that genre. One of the best fantasy-writing bloggers I have found so far is Nicola Alter. Her site Thoughts on Fantasy is exactly what you’d expect from such title, a discussion of different aspects of the genre. She often examines genre tropes and suggests books that do them well. It just further proves that there is nothing wrong with writing tropes, as long as they are done well.

Flash Fiction Groups

There are countless flash fiction groups on WordPress. These sites provide a photo prompt with some basic writing guidelines. Then writers pen a story and link their page to the host page. This is a great way to meet new writers. I used to participate in several of these weekly groups, though I have not been able to keep up in recent months due to regular life rearing its ugly head.

My favorite of all of these flash fiction challenge groups, by far, has to be Three Line Tales. First, Sonya always chooses great photo prompts, which makes the writing easy. But the thing I like most about this challenge is the unique restriction. Most flash fiction challenges use word count as their key restriction, often 100-150 words. Word count limits are a great way to improve your writing. They force you to be conscious about word choice and efficiency. 3LineTales does things a bit different, though, namely the restriction is in the number of lines rather than words. Many authors who participate write poetry, which doesn’t interest me much, and others do not follow the line restriction as strictly as I do. I hold myself to three sentences, exactly three, no exceptions. The benefit of this is that I have been learning how to manipulate sentences in interesting ways, often with a lot of semi-colons, em-dashes and other funny punctuation. It lets you play with sentence length and paragraph flow in a very focused testing ground. I encourage you to give it a try, and to force yourself to only three sentences.

Best regards to all the other wonderful bloggers I follow which I could not mention here!

Are there any writing bloggers you follow that I should know about?


Look at This Shiny New Website!


Hello Blogosphere! I have finally transcended your little free world into the final dimension of full webpagedness!

As you can see, what inklings I had regarding minimalism with my previous blog have flared up to the maximum level. But I like it. This site–and myself by criminal association–is about writing, which is words, which are made of letters, which are those weird line things that make sounds, or at least we think they make sounds, but it’s really just us making the sounds as we please, really without much logic to the sounds we choose to make…

Sorry for my distraction. I’m just excited! My journey into this writing thing started just a little under a year ago. Now I am taking things to the next level. (Plus I got a great deal on web-hosting, 70% off for just not completing my order in like 2 minutes. Like what did they expect? Me not reading the fine print? That I’d be chomping at the bit to code?)

Apologies again. I’m not normally this humorous, I promise.

I’ve cleaned up my publications list. You can find it HERE. Look at all those stories! Now all I have to do is get a couple on there that actually make me money, then I’ll be in…the money, I guess.

I have made some feeble attempts at migrating my follower list to this new site, so hopefully all my old writing friends will get the notice and come by for a visit. If you do, you can sign-up for my newsletter, over there, lower right. I know you see it.

I have been quite busy lately with real work–yuk!–so I might not be posting that much in these initial days of new adventure. But I have a lot of things going for me right now. Several new acceptances have come in and many more are looking likely. Nothing pro-rated yet, but I’m only 10-months old. I speak damn good for a toddler.

If you’re wondering where the term “Rabble” is coming from, it’s ’cause of this guy:

It was an inside joke related to the too many of cats that I currently have in my tiny home. How many you ask? Too many. But “rabble” is such a great word. Why not use it for my band of rowdy followers?

So join my Rabble and come along with me! This is going to be fun!

Writing Updates


I’ve been pretty bad at updating this blog during the past few weeks. I’ve been on military orders and my work with the Army had been a lot more intense and rigorous than I expected. Add to that the deep academic nature of much of what I do, which tends to leave my brain melted at the end of the day. It’s an excuse, I know, but I haven’t yet figured out how to break through.

That’s not to suggest that things haven’t been happening with my writing. I have quite a few stories coming out this month in external publication. I’ve just seen the proofs for the two Bards and Sages issues I have stories in, and I must say, they look really nice. One is the July issue of the quarterly, which will feature one of my Iric flash stories. The other will be released in their Great Tome of Magicians, Necromancers and Mystics, and is related to my stone-age fantasy story that was published on Bewildering Stories. Both of the B&S works will be out in print.

I’ve received a couple more acceptances with publishers I’ve worked with before. Two stories will be published by Fantasia Divinity, one in their monthly magazine and one in an upcoming anthology. I also had another story accepted by Antipodean SF.

Speaking of Anti-SF, my story Webs was published in their previous ezine issue and will come out on the radio show a the end of July. I will post a link once the episode is out.

I’ve got another story awaiting a final read with The Centropic Oracle and some other stories pending with a few different anthologies. Nothing is set, but I have pretty good feelings about making most of them.

While a lot of things have been happening on the short fiction side of the fence, the book side is still a struggle. I haven’t received a positive reply from a single agent yet. I’ve queried about 50 agents in total, 19 are pending. It’s looking more and more like my innovative novel structure is too much for agents to want to take on. I might have to consider an alternate publishing route with this one. Maybe submitting directly to smaller publishers might be the better course.

My work with Fiction Vortex has also stagnated a bit. The Of Metal and Magic StoryVerse–which I am a founding member of–just lost an author. We’ve had to push back our deadlines and release plans, and this has taken a lot of the wind from our sails. Things are still progressing, albeit slowly. I have the first two episodes of my series Call of the Guardian drafted and plan to write the next soon, once I can get past this slump and get back into writing. The cover for my project is almost done as well, and I will be sharing that once I have it.

One of the cool things about writing for FV is that the company takes care of most of the marketing and publishing work. They get the covers made, provide editing services, and provide an app and website to distribute your work. They also have a marketting team that operates on various social media platforms. It really is a great place to work. If you are a sword&sorcery writer, why not submit a sample and try to join Of Metal and Magic? If our StoryVerse head lets you in, you’ll be working with me directly! If you’re interested, contact me on Facebook and I can help facilitate the submission process.

Well, that’s about all for now. I hope everyone is seeing progress with your writing projects. Keep up the fight!


Seeing Red



Added status counts to my publishing spreadsheet today (Excel is so useful!). Oh boy, that’s a lot of red!

But I’m not letting that slow me down. I just got a new acceptance letter today, recently got a request for a rewrite, and have two other stories in the final round of selection at their respective publishers. As I evolve into a better writer, I can see the momentum of acceptance picking up. It took me months to get my first, now they are coming every couple weeks–volume probably plays a part in that as well.

The worst thing that has come out of all this so far is not the rejection. I’ve quickly grow Teflon skin. The worst thing probably has to be that AntipodeanSF asked me to record myself narrating “Webs.” Ugg…rolleyes

My Story on “Playing with Words”


Colleague and fellow blogger Kavita Chavda has set up a new website called Playing With Words that uses contributor content. It has a very minimalistic setup, which seems nice in an age of media and imagery overload.

Anyways, I wrote a story for her based in my Valley of Magic mythology, which I think turned out pretty fine. Though we have no contractual agreement, I want to give her some time of exclusivity with the piece. She also chose a nice cover photo for the story, which is something I usually don’t do.

So if you want to read my story “Aiyel, Daughter of the Sea” which is related to the Sorun mythology and also a tie-in to my upcoming book, head over to the site and give it a read. And maybe send her something to share while you’re at it…


 *Other related stories on this blog:  Glacial Rage,  The Light of Tumin

3 Ways to Become a Better Writer


Most writers know two simple ways to get better at writing. They are the basic tips of any professional writing program or class. Stephen King summed it up quite well in his great treatise of the craft On Writing, suggesting “If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. There’s no way around these two things that I’m aware of, no shortcut.”

The writing part is obvious. As with any skill, you get better the more you do it. Reading is less intuitive, but still relatively straight forward–getting better at language requires exposure to language, becoming a better storyteller requires exposure to stories. King goes on to suggest that “reading is the creative center of a writer’s life,” meaning the place you decide what you want to create. He even claims to read 70-80 books a year.

But there is a third thing you can do to help you become a better writer. In addition to reading and writing, writing about writing is extremely helpful in improving your skills. This is much the same as when professional athletes and coaches watch other teams play, examining their strengths and weaknesses. By identifying someone else’s strengths, you can adopt them and make them your own.

Much of what I do with this blog is writing about writing. And to be perfectly honest, I do it mostly for myself. I don’t really have enough followers to honestly believe that I have a large effect on the public. But I don’t need to. Every piece I write, every analysis I do, helps to make me a better writer. That’s why I do it.

I often share stories and articles I like, but I also add my own analysis or point of view. By interacting with other authors’ work, I can tease out what I like–or don’t like–and examine what makes it so. Then I can utilize the skills I like, and avoid the habits I don’t.

Also, discussing writing techniques reinforces them in your own mind. We all forget the basics from time to time. Taking them out of your head, or away from the story, allows you to focus on them more clearly.

You do not need to be a language or writing major to do this sort of textual analysis. All it requires is focus enough to decide what parts you like or dislike, and a little effort to examine why. If you like a piece of writing, there is certainly a technical reason for it. The better you grasp that reason, the better you can emulate it. And in the end, writing is mostly emulation.

I started this blog several months ago, intending primarily to post my own short stories here. Over time, I started sharing other writers’ work and articles on writing techniques. Once I started sharing other authors’ work and doing some analysis, I found myself becoming much better. Even in the few months, I can look back at my first stories and see how far I have come (Go on, compare “The Adventures of Iric” volume 1 to volume 12 and try to tell me I’m not the slightest bit better). I am sure that writing about writing has contributed to that significantly.

Becoming a better writer takes time and investment. King is pretty rough on the point when he suggests “If you feel you must have the news analyst blowhards on CNN while you exercise…it’s time for you to question how serious you really are about becoming a writer….Reading takes time and the glass teat takes too much of it.” It’s harsh, but true. You need to devote time and effort to improving your craft, otherwise you won’t.

In the end, it comes down to three basic methods: reading, writing, and writing about writing. The more you do those, the better you will become.


What is success in writing?


What makes a fiction writer successful? No really, tell me, I’d love to know.

I’ve been at this writing thing for several months now and it’s a question I still cannot answer, particularly in reference to myself. I’m not new to writing. I have been writing since childhood, studied creative writing in college, and have produced complete pieces here and there. But this is the first time I’ve tried to make an occupation out of it.

In that case, does success merely equal money? If a writer manages to get a great book deal, or reel in a bunch of royalties, is that success? Is making enough just to get by and continue writing success? If so, I am an abject failure. And on a side note, there are a lot of writers with regular jobs that still produce, get published, and develop a following.

Is the answer then popularity? A lot of people seem to think if a books sells a million copies is the greatest mark of success. Even if the book isn’t technically good. I have been gaining some followers here on this blog, but nothing like other popular writers. One of my favorite fiction bloggers, Esther Davis, has over 3,500 followers! Man, I’m jealous. Though I do feel better since her blog says I’m “amazing” for following it. It’s nice to be amazing at something!

A big part of me feels like the mark of success for a writer is being published. To this end I have three works so far that have been accepted and/or published by professional magazines. But that’s less than one per month. In my defense, it’s hard when it takes most places a month or more to tell you anything–that anything usually being a stock rejection letter. I have been focusing on this view of success quite a bit, and have more than a couple dozen other stories out with publishers at this time.

Because of my focus on professional publishing, my blog does not get a whole lot of new material these days. When I write a new story, if I feel it has any chance of being published elsewhere, I keep it off the blog. Is that a bad habit? Should I be posting more here, focusing on creating an audience?

Success, and how to achieve it, is a question that still baffles me. I welcome any ideas or suggestions you may have. Please leave a comment if you think you have an answer for me.

Considering the Reader – WriteWorks


WriteWorks is a relatively young editing company managed, in part, by a guy named James Hallman. He’s the guy doing the editing for my current book. His assistance has been indispensable, though his detailed comments have left me with a lot more revision work than I expected!

The WriteWorks blog has a lot of good articles on the craft, many of which I will probably share sometime in the future. The one below is on considering your reader when you write.

One thing I would add to this discussion is that in addition to general readers–the market public so to speak–you must also consider the editors and publishers reviewing your work as a sort of readership. This is particularly true with short and flash stories, as their fate, whether they are accepted or rejected, often comes down to the opinion and choice of one or two editors. I have learned that these editors often have very distinct wants and opinions; they will accept works that fit their own mood or style.

I have had three pieces rejected from Daily Science Fiction, all that I have thus far submitted to them. A writer who was published by them told me that the editors at DSF prefer experimental pieces. I have also determined through reading that they like first-person narrators. Anyone who reads my blog will know I don’t do experimental. And I don’t care for first-person in most cases. So it leaves me with three choices. I can continue sending my very standard, action-centered, third-peson stuff to DSF to be rejected, or I can write something more in line with what they want, or I can find other venues. The first option is just silly; the other two require me to consider the publishers as readers and to tweak my stories appropriately.

Follow the link below to read the full article on the WriteWorks blog.


At the heart of any creative endeavor, there is always a question about the audience. It’s one that really plagues starting writers, who often carry around a lot of doubt—often so much that they forget to start writing. But questions about the reader come up a lot at writers conventions and lecture series, always to be answered by a variety of marketing professionals checking in with questions about target audiences, sales demographics, trends, ideal readers, and any other variety of tips about the proper targeting of books. Even in my coaching and editing work, I often find conversations being steered back towards these considerations…Read the Full Post Here

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